domingo 20 de enero de 2008
Yesterday, I was peacefully watching in my home the newspaper, when suddenly read an uncanny story :
"A mental patient has killed his roommate with an axe because he had annoyed him sometimes. He was a real pain in the neck. This mental patient had found out that, his roommate , soon could go out and come back his home, so he prefer damage to kill him "
This man was really crazy!
The strange think is how was possible to find in a Mental Hospital this kind of objects, an axe for seven months and organize a murder. Also is unbelievable that he didn´t regret and he was pleased doing it.
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You are right! I also red the story in the newspaper and I was very impressed! How could had happened such a thing. Could the hospital staff prevent this? You have made a good choose: a real story that is an uncanny story.
Weird piece of news. I wonder what has happened to the Mental Hospital. They seem quite guilty according to what you explain.
Have a look at my language suggestions. You really need to write a lot and think about word order specially among other things. Try to understan my corrections and ask me if you do not understand.
-I was peacefully READING THE NEWSPAPER AT HOME, when I (YOU NEED THE PRONOUN) suddenly read
-This mental patient had found out that his roommate could SOON (WO)go out and come back FROM his home, so he preferED TO damage HIM BY KILLING him "
-The strange THING is how was it possible to find THESE (PLURAL!!) kind of objects (WO) in a Mental Hospital? (YOU NEED A QUESTION MARK AT THE END OF THIS SENTENCE.
(I CANNOT UNDERSTAND YOUR FOLLOW UP?
-an axe for seven months and organize a murder. (????)
- IT IS also (WO) unbelievable that he didn't regret WHAT HE DID and THAT he was pleased doing it.
That could be the spark idea for a thriller! What a world!
Yes. You're right.
But,what we could expect from a mental patient...
The thing is: what was the staff of the Hospital doing? The patient was there for something, we don't know but they do and probably this murder could have being avoid.
The Mental Hospitals aren't what they use to be..ha,ha
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